by Melissa May 31, 2016
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Your love, like cactus fruit |
by D.
Ah I remember your poetry so much! This is beautifully written, as always. The final stanza’s abruptness is so effective. |
What wonderful thorns of love. |
by Maple Tree
Judge Comment: |
by Darren
Judges comment |
by Maher
I really liked this one. The title got me - I love prickly pears. The alliteration used made me start to crave them, a good choice of words there. Just the right length overall and really tells a good story. You've engaged quite a few senses in this poem which is something great and is what I believe the aim of poetry should be. Awesome work and thanks for sharing it with us :) |