by Nicko
Have you written a book of your poems ? you should I'd buy it. I'm amazed at your talent, your poems never fail to move me... |
by Ben Pickard
Hello Melissa |
by Mr. Darcy
Hello, |
by Em
Melissa, this is truly beautiful. |
by Brenda
So well written-I love the imagery here- |
by Brenda
Congratulations on your win-beautifully written! |
by Michael
Hi Melissa loved reading your poem. Showed it to friends and they loved it too :) |
by Meena Krish
I like how you have turned the pear into someone you just simply can't be without! You have made a simple fruit so uniquely different and wanting! |
by Maher
I really liked this one. The title got me - I love prickly pears. The alliteration used made me start to crave them, a good choice of words there. Just the right length overall and really tells a good story. You've engaged quite a few senses in this poem which is something great and is what I believe the aim of poetry should be. Awesome work and thanks for sharing it with us :) |
by Darren
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by Maple Tree
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What wonderful thorns of love. |
by D.
Ah I remember your poetry so much! This is beautifully written, as always. The final stanza’s abruptness is so effective. |