by GB
This is sadly beautiful, flowing smoothly with very elegant, careful wording. |
Yeah I agree with your suggestion! Thank you so much for your advice! :) |
by Em
Cedricluk, this is truly beautifully written but so so sad. The deeper meaning here (I feel) is live/love whilst you can because we are all heading to the same place and none of us are safe from that fact. We need to live whilst we are alive and tell those we love that we love them before its too late. |
by Mr. Darcy
Lovely theme used well throughout this poem. Eyes see and remember what has been, but also see all the possible futures including the lost ones. |