Comments : Halloween love

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Moses

    Another delicate little piece from you, beautifully worded and wonderfully displayed - it really is a pleasure to view and read.

    Take care and all the very best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Another beautiful piece full of wonderful imagery of two lovers dancing the night away in each others arms. That would be so perfect.

    Arms in arms
    ...and masked.
    a halloween night,
    with no tricks
    only treats
    ...of love .
    ^^
    Love this ending because these lovers were masked so didn't see each other yet still found it in them to fall in love, which goes to show it isn't always what's on the outside that counts.

    Beautiful write,
    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Love it so much I commented twice :)

  • 8 years ago

    by The Po whet

    Thanks Ben and Em for your comments .I so much appreciate it.