Full empty

by The Po whet   Jun 9, 2016


I feel emptiness inside.
It consumes me
...it tastes like the darkest of nights
...I cant comprehend.
...I feel empty.

I feel emptiness inside.
it burns
like hot pepper smeared on wounded tongue.

I feel emptiness inside.
my soul is empty
as be a haunted deserted forest
where only naked silence rings.

I feel emptiness inside.
...emptiness
that I've tried to fill with all
sorts of addictions;
whiskey,music,love,
and even "malarkey poems".

...but I still feel empty.
...emptiness that devours
all my ephemeral fills
...likening them all to dentures.

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  • 10 months ago

    by Grace Muthoni

    Am really having lots of fun reading your work The Po whet

  • 8 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Wawoooooo it is really nice.
    well done.

    • 8 years ago

      by The Po whet

      Thanks for the comment Jyoti,I appreciate

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Moses

    An 'empty' write here that's dripping in sadness.
    It's funny - when we feel like this, nothing can fill the metaphorical hole, can it?

    "and even 'malarkey' poems" - great line that really carries a punch.

    Take care and all the best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Moa, as always a great piece with so much emotion in it.

    When one feels empty it can feel unbearable and definitely as you describes but when we get to a point of 'no return' from emptiness it can feel as though there's no going back.. No one for us, no one we can trust etc but we can with strength and I know one day you will no longer feel empty. I have faith in you. :)

    I like the imagery that the emptiness holds a darkness that no one else will understand and you metaphors are wonderful.

    I feel emptiness inside.
    ...emptiness
    that I've tried to fill with all
    sorts of addictions;
    whiskey,music,love,
    and even "malarkey poems".
    ^^
    This is my fave stanza because as humans we will try and fill our emptiness with other things, even if they aren't right for us.

    All the best, Em

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