Comments : The Dream of Completion

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I see work stopped getting in the way.
    Beautiful. Lucky person to wake up with you :)

    • 8 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      Dang, that was impressively quick! No one is waking up next to me, unfortunately for me and fortunately for them! I just wrote this to add some variety to what has been, of late, a bunch of whiny poems. Glad you liked it, though. You're the one who has found love, and probably can relate to this poem more than me! Hah!

  • 8 years ago

    by Liz

    I wonder if you'll be able to write this good, lovey stuff when you find love! Lol. I do love this, it gives off a good feeling.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Well thanks I dint know you felt that way (lol) joking aside I like this sweet side to you. It's a nice change to see a love poem from you and a beautiful one to say the least. I feel when you have that special someone that this is how it feels and even in our dark moments they'll help us through.

    All the best, Em