by Maher Jun 10, 2016
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The day falls short on an open valley, |
by Em
Definitely part 2 :) |
The masses have spoken. Let there be a part two! |
by Maher
Haha I'll see if I can come up with anything. Thank you sir :) |
Wow =) i cant wait if there is a part 2.. well done :) |
by Maher
Lol thank ya ma'am, I'll try to make it :) |
I agree with Em, this sounds like it's the beginning to an interesting story. Shall there be a part two? |
by Maher
Thank you sir. Honestly, I intended it to be left open ended, but I might consider a part 2 if Em and yourself think it deserves one :) |
by Em
Maher, a very deep /dark piece here. Lots of descriptive imagery and emotion as always and enthralling write by you. |
by Maher
Thank you Em, as always. Feel free to pull it apart if you like, it's always interesting to see the interpretation of others :) |