Sounds like a conversation my Hubby and I have every once in a while...

This poem is unique and creative Luce...I love your style!!

This is an amazing poem,the creativity in it awes me.congrats

Lice, I love the style of this poem as Andrew said it's unique. I do like the speech within the piece and feel many people if not everybody can relate it will eventually.

"I miss you"

He said.
^^
A great opening. The speech is great as I said. Many people can relate to this as I miss you is (I feel) used as often as I love you, unfortunately as usually in the wrong context and untrue.

And I replied,

Do you miss me because you feel lonely?
Or do you feel lonely because you miss me?
^^
Love this part because many people will only say it because they are lonely not because they miss you. Again, relatable.

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I must say that I
Love my solitude the same way I love him
And for me to love him
Even when I love my solitude
^^
The pause is a good way of making us readers pause and catch breath like I feel the writer did when thinking of him and the feeling of alone.. Wondering if she loves being lonely as much as she loves him, perhaps?

It must be madness.
^^
Love sends us mad as does not being in love or loved.
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So I asked him,

Do you miss me because you feel lonely?
Or do you feel lonely because you miss me?
^^
Love the repetition here.

And he replied,

"What?..."
^^
Hmm, makes me wonder if you've split or just having a conversation with a partner. Either way, great work.

All the best, Em

Very nicely explain clear meaning of
very common line "I Miss u"