Comments : The Untold Story

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Wow S. I cant wait for part 2..
    So descriptive and left me wanting more..

  • 8 years ago

    by Maher

    That is indeed my kind of thing, though a little gorier than I expected. The story in my opinion is awesome. The scene is painted well and I can clearly envision the state the bound man is in. I can even picture the walls of the room - grey stones. A huge, heavy wooden table with a messy banquet in the middle of the room being feasted upon by men still in their armour reeking of the sweat of battle.

    Nice one, good Sir :)

    • 8 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      I would not have posted it under dark poems if it were not to be dark! Definitely proud of this one, and my friends' seals of approval mean a lot :) Thank you, and I hope the next installment doesn't disappoint!

      V/r
      IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Wow. Well, here goes for a vague comment...
    So much dark imagery and descriptive, I felt like I was in this place. Cannot wait for part 2.
    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      Thank you, it was an inspirational combination of the book I was reading (The Captive Prince by CS Pacat) and watching Game of Thrones :P I'm glad you liked the imagery and description! Hope part two works out as well!

      -IdTakeABulletForYou