Comments : Cursed Sands - The Arrival

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I went back and read part 1 then this. They flow well together.. excellent work :) i really love them both.

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks dudette - was your ideas that got this one going, so thanks :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Maher what a wonderful, dark poem. So much imagery throughout.
    This goes well with the first piece.
    All the best, Em

    *apologies on vagueness*

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks :)