More of Your Love

by Kips2.0   Jun 20, 2016


I am a lover of words, so speak up;
extremely sensitive to them, so be cautious
because I passionately hate negativity!

If you want to encourage my dreams
you can do so simply with your positive words;
negative words can easily dampen my mood.

I prefer bitter truths than sweet lies,
so you may give me a piece of your mind,
only make sure you do so with love.

Personally, I want us to build a world together,
one with an atmosphere of free expression,
lacking deceit but filled with ingenuity.

I fancy a world so warm and inviting
that everyone, whosoever, is drawn to it,
owning to our transparency and kindness.

So I implore you to be my second hand
because there is no "I" in the word "TEAM;"
and assuredly a tree cannot make a forest.

Do not hide your feelings from me,
because you may be the one for me,
but I will never know unless you tell me.

So do not take to the back burner,
reveal yourself fully to me,
I cannot wait to love you deeply, passionately.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Kips this is magnificent!! End of story! :)
    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Kips

    The word "passionately" is used at least twice in this piece and that's the lasting impression I take from this - written with obvious passion.
    Great write and all the best,
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Kips2.0

      Thank you very much, Ben!