Comments : Reminiscence

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Absolutely loved this-from the first stanza to the end-I was totally engaged in the entire write-Wow!

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your win! Well deserved, it's an awesome write!

    • 8 years ago

      by Sunshine

      Thank you Brenda, very kind of you..

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Congratulations on your win :)

  • 8 years ago

    by hiraeth

    Congrats on the win!

    • 8 years ago

      by Sunshine

      Thank you, very kind of you

  • 8 years ago

    by Darren

    Judges comment

    Just love the first stanza. How many times have we looked at empty seats that were once used by a loved one, a space at the table, the favourite chair unoccupied. You have written a very powerful piece here that is stacked with emotion. So many good lines that resonate with your reader.
    This piece had me thinking which I like and was one of the first I thought of after reading all entries. 4 points

    • 8 years ago

      by Sunshine

      Thank you Daren, heart-warming

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hello Nana,

    Lovely piece, well written:)

    Isn't it funny how our inner world can sometimes be richer and fuller than our outside world could ever be? Maybe especially so for creative people, who have so much to bring into reality of what was first just an inner richness:)

    Well done, worthy win xxx

    Ingrid