by IdTakeABulletForYou Jun 21, 2016
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The moment I have my doubts, I lose; |
by mossgirl19
Oh, love, just where it takes us. This was a beautiful write, and yes, don't jump off the cliff. Oh, a figurative death, as you say. :-) |
by Vicente
As always you know I love your poems. Even when I don't like the mood they set, or the way you tie in a dark element of demise. I cam hear your voice right now telling me that it kinda sounds like something I'd write about you from my point of view. |
Cause you cray! Thanks for reading, and commenting, even though I told you it was an allegory and the mention of death isn't a literal death but a figurative one! Tsk tsk. |
by Brenda
This is so sad-I don't know your circumstances but I can tell you have a lot of pain and possibly this relationship is a big part of it. It's so hard to be in a bad relationship-part of you know it's no good but the other part of you just wants to hold on even if it's destroying you. Stay strong and true to yourself, you really deserve that! Take care-Brenda |
Thank you very much for checking this piece out :-) There's is so much pain in the world, happiness is not about running from it or being without it, but learning to endure it and be happy nonetheless. While I tried to make the poem "literally" seem to be about a relationship, this poem is "allegorically" about a love tryst with the person I am and the person I want to be. Loving myself and hating myself at the same time, always at odds with who society tells me to be and how they treat me when I follow suit. |
by Em
S, this is a very powerful piece with a deep meaning to you especially with what you told me. It reduced me to tears actually because so many of us are treated so poorly. We can't be too skinny, too fat, too ugly, too beautiful etc without being judged, I live for the day when we all live in harmony. Yeah, I know I'll never see it well none of us will because it's only going to get worse. |
It definitely was a rough weekend, but sometimes the most difficult times are the most inspiring. |
I think your correct :( i can not find a nominations thing anywhere! I may need Em to help. she has gold! |