by Em
N, I love this triple senryu. It's great. I like that your branching out and trying new things because you're good at what you do. |
by Brenda
Beautifully done-there something about cuddling up with your pet that is just comfort. Listening to them purr and just looking at you with pure love, everything is right with the world at that moment. |
Thanks Brenda :) |
by Em
Forgot to say there's a typo on friends "friens" |
Thanks Em :) |
The following are my suggested edits for the poem: |
Thanks S! believe it or not, this was at 2am our time and I couldn't sleep. the cats came in for a cuddle! They are adorable little girls :P who even get under the blankets and sleep like people on the pillows! |
Also, I believe I led you astray. The two lines: |
Thanks S - it was written by a true crazy cat lady.. :P |