Comments : Passive

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Crystal and welcome to the site.

    A lovely first post from you here, written beautifully.

    Take care and keep writing,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Greeter

    I can relate to the first two lines of this poem:

    "I laid dormant deep in heart
    deep in thought"

    I'm glad to see that despite the hurt and the horrors, a soul was able to find tranquility. There's a hint of positivity in the poem.

    Welcome to Poems and Quotes

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Crystal, I really like this piece. I like how you describe continually being molded because of past and present people and relationships. I see you more strong and determined than passive. Well done-look forward to more writes from you-Brenda