To Be Completely Forgotten (Oblivion)

Trevor, another awesome one dude. Again, like your first poem on here, there's a good flow. This one is more complicated and to me, has more emotion. I can tell it came from the heart - there's a force behind it that can't have been brought about by fluke or just for the hell of writing. It doesn't come across as a rap like the other did, but it can definitely become one. If you have a sound track, I'd love to hear it.

Thanks for sharing this with us all my friend :)

Thankyou all by Agro's testimony I seen it like _-agro is an intense broken hearted longing lost feeling of like and unquenchable un conscious self hatred from betrayal and abandonment no matter how happy I came and try to do my best I and always falling back with the the testimony of agro is what I have to do and will do to fight for and achieve what I want in my life no matter how hard I will not let this works corrupt me. My most prizes possession is my huge heart. I'm just a love bug and so while I travel along now the testimoney that so the plan and tough things I have to go to to reach my full potential no matter how hard in the end I'll shed my porcelain doing and be free again

Trev - I like this. Its very eye opening and real as to how we all feel at some stage in our life.

My soul cracked like porcelain; forced to fake.
The pain I try to outrun leads me to more levels of Agro's testimony...

^^^
We all fake some part of our lives in one way or another, whether is our happiness, or faking friends or how good our lives are....
With the agro's testimony i have no clue what your aiming for - but i feel as though a piece of you may be angry at the pain and your trying to cover it up.. I may be wrong :P

All in all - very great write!

Ohhhj haha thank you senpai

Oops, forgot another change:

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