The following are corrections I'd suggest for this poem:

After the last petals fall from the flower of love,
rose thorns and briar's condense me like clouds to a dove.
Young life living in blissful ignorance,
but when I stop and appreciate, I'm ensnared by joy's true essence.
Crippled from saudade memories,
My soul cracked like porcelain; forced to fake.
The pain I try to outrun leads me to more levels of Agro's testimony...
Outside I look jubilant but oblivion reeks from the inside, things I reaped from what I sow.
I've done my devil's deeds and wonder, "Why unto me?"
You land all of these bruises- patronizing and frivolously blown.
Blown to living glass from love's past ash, you see?
I just don't want to be forgotten. Don't let me slip into sanity.
"Insane," some say, but I say "Awake and freed from oblivion; not forgotten but set free."

In order to make it more coherent I made those changes, edited a couple words. I suggest just copying and pasting the edit into the poem.

It is a strong piece, what I believe to be about the fear of normalcy, of being forgotten, of fading away. A very relatable poem, troubles every person deal with in their lifetime. I honestly have never heard the term "Argo's testimony", and I'm curious as to what that is. I tried to google it, to no avail.

Also, I would suggest for the poem's title, I would retype it out to be a little more friendly. It is confusing, the way it is now. I'd word it as such:

To Be Completely Forgotten (Oblivion)

It would probably attract more visitors so you'd get even more critiques than I!

All-in-all, wonderful write.
5/5
IdTakeABulletForYou

Oops, forgot another change:

*briars

Ohhhj haha thank you senpai

Trev - I like this. Its very eye opening and real as to how we all feel at some stage in our life.

My soul cracked like porcelain; forced to fake.
The pain I try to outrun leads me to more levels of Agro's testimony...

^^^
We all fake some part of our lives in one way or another, whether is our happiness, or faking friends or how good our lives are....
With the agro's testimony i have no clue what your aiming for - but i feel as though a piece of you may be angry at the pain and your trying to cover it up.. I may be wrong :P

All in all - very great write!

Thankyou all by Agro's testimony I seen it like _-agro is an intense broken hearted longing lost feeling of like and unquenchable un conscious self hatred from betrayal and abandonment no matter how happy I came and try to do my best I and always falling back with the the testimony of agro is what I have to do and will do to fight for and achieve what I want in my life no matter how hard I will not let this works corrupt me. My most prizes possession is my huge heart. I'm just a love bug and so while I travel along now the testimoney that so the plan and tough things I have to go to to reach my full potential no matter how hard in the end I'll shed my porcelain doing and be free again

Trevor, another awesome one dude. Again, like your first poem on here, there's a good flow. This one is more complicated and to me, has more emotion. I can tell it came from the heart - there's a force behind it that can't have been brought about by fluke or just for the hell of writing. It doesn't come across as a rap like the other did, but it can definitely become one. If you have a sound track, I'd love to hear it.

Thanks for sharing this with us all my friend :)