Popcorn Poetry (Senryu Triplet)

by IdTakeABulletForYou   Jun 23, 2016


When I eat popcorn,
the kernels stick in my mouth.
It's quite annoying.

Why I eat popcorn
when the kernels will get stuck?
I always wonder.

I guess we're willing
to suffer a little for
the things we love most.

-IdTakeABulletForYou

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  • 8 years ago

    by Liz

    This is how I feel about sweets when I know it's going to hurt my tooth every time :( lol

  • 8 years ago

    by Vicente

    I agree with the last stance. If you are willing to suffer a little for things that you love then it shows that you do, indeed, love those things.

    A simple and quirky piece. I like it even though you know I don't like popcorn. XP

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Thanks S. Gong to work on one :)

    • 8 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      If you don't have a gong to work on, what are you doing with your life?! ;)

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    S - We all would! ;) LOL also glad your back!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    S, love this. I'm not sure if popcorn is a connotation for something else though or it is just what it is.

    Yes, we do suffer for the things we love.

    Great write, I need to try one of these.
    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      Thank you very much :) Glad we could inspire each other; you inspire me with the Senryu, and I inspire you with the triplet!!! Hope to see something of the like coming from you soon :P

      Much love,
      S

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