Very powerful. S will correct you (as he does!) And let you know some doesnt rhyme. :) but its okay. I like it! |
by Vicente
I know he will, but he's always mean to me. Lol. I hope he will find some liking for this one though. |
We have a group of us. All have open ears if you need someone to listen. Theres em, maher (m), marvelous S and myself :) |
by Em
All I can say is wow. |
by Brenda
Such a true powerful write-it is so unfortunate that we can't let people just be who they are, without the backlash. Religion is a funny thing, they say love one another but yet say certain people are sinners-why are some people deserving and others are not? I really like this a lot-well done. |
by Marvellous
I understand the feel here, gem. There's only one right thing to do. Who shows mercy, has done justice. |
Nice sentiments in this poem which I like, but the reality is that our freedoms have to be defended as there is always some dictator, fanatic or religion that seeks to take away our freedoms and democracies. |
Love it |