by Maher Jun 24, 2016
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
First attempt at a Senryu. My apologies if it's incorrect. |
It is a good Senyru. I can feel the anger. |
Excellent use of word play, love it! Your imagery is definitely on point and I also feel the anger, but I feel like there is a heavy sense of finality at the end. But I could be blathering. ;) |
by Maher
Thank you ma'am. You're right about the end :) |
by Darren
Judges comment |
by Maher
Thank you Sir, very much appreciated :) |
by hiraeth
I gotta say, one hell of a first attempt for it to end up on the front page! Congrats on the win! |
by Maher
Thank you Sir :) |
Many congrats on winning with this beautiful piece! |
by Maher
Thank you, Sir. |