by Ben Pickard
Maher - first attempt, good man? This is accomplished excellence and I won't hear otherwise! |
by Maher
Thank you, Sir! Since it's come from you, I'll not say otherwise. Many thanks for the feedback, my friend :) |
by Em
Maher, a great first senryu by you and to make it better you tripled it :) |
by Maher
Thank you ma'am. It is to do with the story. I thought it'd be interesting to have something alongside it..kinda like a preview of what's to come lol. |
This is brilliant sc!! =) i love it. Well done |
by Maher
Thanks USB :) |
Well done, it came out beautiful! |
by Maher
Thank you Sir, much appreciated :) |
by Em
It that case, I can't wait! :) |
by Brenda
Congratulations on your win! Not only was this your first Senryu but you did a three part one, talk about knocking it out of the park! Well done, well deserved. Brenda |
by Maher
Haha well this is unexpected! Thank you ma'am :) |
by Em
Congratulations on your win :) |
by Maher
Thank ya ma'am :) |
Congrats on your win SC |
by Maher
Thanks USB :) |
Many congrats on winning with this beautiful piece! |
by Maher
Thank you, Sir. |
by hiraeth
I gotta say, one hell of a first attempt for it to end up on the front page! Congrats on the win! |
by Maher
Thank you Sir :) |
by Darren
Judges comment |
by Maher
Thank you Sir, very much appreciated :) |
Excellent use of word play, love it! Your imagery is definitely on point and I also feel the anger, but I feel like there is a heavy sense of finality at the end. But I could be blathering. ;) |
by Maher
Thank you ma'am. You're right about the end :) |
It is a good Senyru. I can feel the anger. |