The Cold (unfinished)

by deeplydesturbed   Jun 30, 2016


The cold is outside
The world is frozen
The cold is inside the heart
No feelings can flow in

The cold means winter
is no longer coming
The cold means the birds
are no longer humming

The cold is rough
Rugged up at home
The cold is lasting
Since we are destroying our ozone

The cold seems never ending
Dark days - followed by a darker night
The cold is rain, ice and snow
Staying warm is a fight

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    N, this is great as Ben said it's dark nature which isn't usually done but you do t well.
    I think when it's cold and wet outside (like here today) it puts us all on a downer, especially when already depressed. (My thoughts)

    Great write none the less, Em

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks em :) maybe it is finished the way it is :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A dark nature poem here which you don't often read, so for that reason, this is an original little piece.

    Well written and well rhymed.

    Take care and stay well,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Ben :) just figuring out how to finish it strongly

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