Comments : The Cold (unfinished)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A dark nature poem here which you don't often read, so for that reason, this is an original little piece.

    Well written and well rhymed.

    Take care and stay well,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Ben :) just figuring out how to finish it strongly

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    N, this is great as Ben said it's dark nature which isn't usually done but you do t well.
    I think when it's cold and wet outside (like here today) it puts us all on a downer, especially when already depressed. (My thoughts)

    Great write none the less, Em

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks em :) maybe it is finished the way it is :)