What an imagenation that you have in the back of your mind !
this must be one of the most descriptive deep poems ive read since i came back here lol....

The ugly snake would have me fear beauty, as if it could rob me like a thief,
But it was the beautiful Eve, who taught me the beauty of sweet relief
Because she had learned through her pain, that our relief comes from our belief
I believe every hair is numbered like every trembling leaf

this is just waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaoooooow..seriously ur so gd as i remember u well done
5/5

Wow...this is really, REALLY good. I love the rhyming and the rhythm. I enjoyed it very, VERY, much! =)
Keep up the amazing work!

--Hannah

Thank you so much for the comment on Eve of my Dreams it was inspired by a very real woman

Interesting poem, i like the way its set as a story, it flows really well and is enjoyable to read
well done!

Wow, this is beautiful! I love how you wonderfully weaved the story to point at our Savior. Great work!