Excellent!

A beautiful poem, a beautiful life, and cheers to there always being something more! Eloquently written, wonderfully designed... you are a sculptor as well as a poet!

5/5
IdTakeABulletForYou

WOW! This is amazing! That's all I got...

Larry, congratulations on your win, I'm still speechless over this-well done!

This is amazing

First off you did such a great work at this shape poetry and if I'm not mistaken it looks like a torch..an Olympic torch..maybe am wrong but the design stands out like that.

The very poem itself reads mystically taking the reader back to the Greek ages which makes me come to a conclusion of the Olympic theme. The beginning of the first 3 stanzas shows the players involved in certain sports and how their strength and onset of mind is pushing them to get to through a certain event.

Then again I might be completely off with this but it has all that ingredients, adventure and that determination of getting through to reach and be the best...

Yet, something
there is, still;
something
... ... ...
more

^^Yes there is always something more, and to go further. Congrats on the Win!

Judging Comment

Mystical, elegant, stylish and unique!

This comment is small but those 4 words sum up this poem to a tee!

Larry has detailed a truly elegant nature piece, at its finest!!