I suggest changing the line "until warmth shall we be?" to "for warmth. Ten? No, twenty!" or "til we're warm? Ten, No, twenty!"... I mean you can mix it up. I just think the exaggeration would really help the reader understand how cold you are, that you feel twenty layers would be what it takes to warm you up ... cause you're obviously close to the arctic lol.

"Outside its foggy" ... its should be "it's".

"Cloud" should be "Clouds".

I suggest, in the last line, changing the phrase "are gone" to "end". It'll make it less unwieldy of a last line, and rhyme with the previous line.

Other than that, know that it's cold because the seasons hate you ... mwah ha ha! lol.

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Much love,
IdTakeABulletForYou

I don't think I want to be where you are at at the moment, it doesn't sound very pleasant, lol. Aside from that - loved it!

I hate winter but I'm always cold haha

Well they do say warm heart, cold hands.

Em

I'd trade excessively hot days for excessively cold days, any day of the week, lol. Shame that it's just rain and not snow :p