Touching. Beautiful :) |
I appreciate your comment. |
by Maher
I agree with Precious, it is quite beautiful and you've done well weaving the sadness in, especially in the last 4 verses, which were my favourite. I feel they are what bring the sadness out the most. |
The last 4 verses are my favorite too. I can't believe this is my first poem. Seriously. My poems get worse as time goes on. |
by Em
A beautiful full of sadness and wonderful imagery. |
Yay! I love the comments. |
by John Doe
I agree with Precious and Maher you have indeed done a very good job in weaving the sadness in. Keep writing!! |
by Shruti
Hi Celeste, |
Thank you, Shruti. I love it how everyone seems to like this. Personally, the last 4 lines were my favorite. |
This is extremely good. Death is such a mystery to us when we are very young. |
It's the perspective of a 8 year old. I guess that's young. |