Comments : Continental Spread (Senryu String)

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Again you all are like rock stars! Beautifully done, beautifully written! You all came together so cohesively - Rock on!

    • 8 years ago

      by The Collaborators

      Thank you for taking the time, once again, to comment our newest piece! You are endlessly appreciated :-)

      Much love and many good vibes sent your way!

      The Collaborators

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a great senryu string - no easy task considering so many of you took part. An original topic, well executed.
    I don't know whether it was intentional, but the last one only has 6 syllables in the second line and 16 syllables in all. Either way, it doesn't matter as I believe the rule for senryu is technically 17 syllables OR LESS. Well done all of you,

    SL

    • 8 years ago

      by The Collaborators

      Thank you very much for an in-depth comment, and for checking the syllables! I have made the alteration where you pointed out the error and I very much so appreciate it :)

      The Collaborators