Vine (a Haiku)

by Little Silver Pen   Jul 8, 2016


I once saw a vine.
It was creeping and clinging
In desperation.

    report violation
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  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Hello Celeste,

    I love nature and haiku...

    This poem is elegant and very pretty!

  • 8 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    The last line has 6 syllables, which is out of the structure for a haiku, but otherwise cute :-) I feel this poem is now kin to the other haiku, since they both have the word "clinging" at the exact same spot in each haiku! Cute!

    5/5
    IdTakeABulletForYou

    • 8 years ago

      by Little Silver Pen

      Thanks, I fixed it. Also, Lonely Leaf and Vine are cousins.

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