The last line has 6 syllables, which is out of the structure for a haiku, but otherwise cute :-) I feel this poem is now kin to the other haiku, since they both have the word "clinging" at the exact same spot in each haiku! Cute! |
Thanks, I fixed it. Also, Lonely Leaf and Vine are cousins. |
by Maple Tree
Hello Celeste, |
Thank you. |