Loneliness

by deeplydesturbed   Jul 10, 2016


Loneliness
Overcame;
Naughtiness
Expressed!
Lonelines
Is
Negative.
Especially in
Selfless
Souls.

One
Virulent
Emptiness
Resolved
Can
Overcome
My
Emotions.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    N, this is a short yet wonderful acrostic and very true. Loneliness does seem to find a way back time and time again to us broken souls doesn't it but when its overcome, it feels great.

    Great write, Em

  • 8 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I get what you're trying to do, but the "R" in overcome threw me for a loop. Random what? :P

    One
    Virulent
    Emptiness
    Resolved
    Can
    Overcome
    My
    Emotions.

    I would suggest that. :P

    Otherwise, wonderful acrostic! :)

    5/5
    IdTakeABulletForYou

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