Ether, this is beautifully written. I like the rhyming and some words are hard to understand (why they were said) but the easiest words to say are always the most difficult to understand.

Em

This is so beautiful-even saying good-bye and your heart breaking was so eloquently put. I love the clouds and how you interwove all of it together. Really nice!

This is just too beautifully written. It touched my heart with its sadness.

--- MKKK