Lonely No More.

Hi Naomi,

This is a sad piece I thought all trough out but you make me smile at the bottom stanza.

However, I don't have to worry
as I am not lonely any more.
I have plenty of friends on P&Q
Who will always willingly open their door

You are good on portraying feelings.. while reading this I found myself sad face and lowered eyes...thanks for the last stanza...such a relief

Gel

Hello Naomi,

from the title I thought this was going to be a cheerful piece. Although there's a happy ending it still feels sad. Your story will make many (myself included) nod, understanding the issues with not feeling like everyone else. Feeling little or no trust in others. It hurts to feel this way, to be isolated as the only safe place is alone.

I understand Naomi. My advice is fake it. Fake being upbeat, being funny, even being nice. After a while, you'll realise you won't need to fake anymore. You'll be comfortable with being you.

The PnQ home is friendly, its full of people who all have their tough stories. We relate to difference and so accept our wonderful colourful family. Welcome and enjoy your stay.

(Hugs) x

Naomi, I really liked this a lot. It is hard to be alone when you are surrounded by people. I love how you described the corridors of your mind. I myself tends to be a loner. Too many people make me jittery. I have a few close friends and that is all. I have no desire to go out and socialize, it causes anxiety. I guess what I'm trying to say that it's ok, there is nothing wrong with talking to your pets and plants. I love the people I have met on P & Q. It has opened up a whole world of like minded people that like me, probably are shy, with our share of issues, who share the common love of writing. So you aren't alone, you always have us! Hugs- Brenda

Naomi,

I thought I'd go over your work and find a piece I hadn't commented on.
This had a very sad and gloomy flavour throughout, but the ending was so much more positive and pleasing to read.
Don't get me wrong, the piece as a whole is well written and rhymed, but it's just nice to see it end happily!
As for speaking to the plants and animals, I should carry on if I were you; there is far more sense to be found there...

Take care and stay well,

Ben

Hello N.

It's hard feeling so alone even in a room full of people but hats what depression does. We could be next to the people that love us but be completely scared and under valued.

Time spent stumbling around mental corridors of thoughts.
The sound of my own voice becomes maddening.
Solitude has corroded into the solitary confinement of grey, cold prison walls.
The whole idea of it is quite saddening.
^^
This is my fave stanza though I'm glad you feel welcomed here.

Em