A well written senryu. I often think that it would be wonderful if we could look into a mirror or see someone else's reflection and cut past the rubbish and see straight into the 'beast' of the matter!

SL

N, what a lovely senryu. we all need time to reflect to find ourselves.
I agree with Sir L it would be good to be able to look straight to a person soul to see through all the rubbish.

Em

Beautifully done Naomi. You see a lot peering into a mirror. I know sometimes I don't like what I see, but I still try to say or think something positive.