by ether
"through waves of motorized metal shards" |
I appreciate the critique :) & I shall look into the punctuation, however I meant to use the words "fairy tail" to show how far fetched the idea is (that a fairy has an actual tail) what a 'fairy tail' that would be? Yes ;) Thank you again for the praise with metaphor! |
by Em
This may be short but it's perfectly written. |
Thank you Em! It is a short poem, no doubt, but I put a lot of heart into it. & I think that is the top reason to write; to be able to fully express yourself. Thanks so much again for the plesent comment :) |