by Em
Another tragic day!! Great piece. |
Thanks Em. S helped a LOT with it :) |
by Liz
Twenty sixteen is a year full of death |
Thank you. |
by Ben Pickard
Words don't do justice to this world's growing list of mindless terror, but you do a damn good job of trying here. |
Thanks Sir L |
I think you should change the exclamation after truck to a semi-colon. Just not something you exclaim, not in a poem, especially a somber one as this is. Then the line after, the "Left them" will be a lowercase L; to be as such: |
No worries S :) |
by Marvellous
Nothing has come to stay, than truth. Against all odds, victory abounds. |