Comments : Everyone loves a panda (syntuit)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Michael, this is so powerful and so true. If only we could all get on eh?

    Again, glad to see you back. Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    It's good to read you again Michael :)

    In just a few lines you piece is thought provoking and true, I think that people need to leave labels behind forget about prejudices of generations past and learn to see each other as brothers and sisters......also.....EVERYBODY does love pandas :)

    Great write.

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, wonderful write! So very true! I wish we could love one another like we do Pandas! Welcome back! Take care -Brenda

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is excellent.

    "Everyone loves pandas"

    ^^

    Not sure what the hell this is going to be about, especially considering it's a syntuit.

    The main body hangs so well together, it would be pointless to break it down line by line. Simply put, nature's colours do contrast well together - it's the variety and difference that make them all so beautiful. The sum is always greater than the parts, and so it should be for humans....except it doesn't seem to be, does it?

    Back to the title. Everyone does indeed love pandas which we should all take something from...they are black AND white.

    Another super piece.

    SL

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Michael love the message here..... I have 4 grandchildren that are the most adorable pandas you will ever meet and yet society marks them as outcast I suppose....this world needs to stop segregation....it needs to embrace all colors of the rainbow...

    This poem touched me!

  • 8 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Excellent! A smart tiny gem!

    --- MKKK

  • 8 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Sadly reflective of the trap in human affairs: no rainbow here offers promise.

  • 8 years ago

    by shloka

    I can imagine so many things just from the title. It reminds of racial segregation, and that blacks and whites should exist together,equally.
    I love pandas, and I call my best friend Panda, (he hates it though) . Nevertheless, it's a clever piece and I really love it :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win Michael. Some very powerful lines. Take care

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Congratulations Michael, well done on such deserving win.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    With what is going on in the world today, the reader cant help but be touched by this eye opening poem by Michael this week! Truly a powerful, formed poem... wonderfully written!