Comments : The Night my Daisy's Died

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, only you can make such sadness so beautiful-lovely-take care-Brenda

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Andrea,

    As Brenda says, 'only you can make such sadness so beautiful...' I think that if it were not for poetry and having the ability to write down what your heart cannot contain you would explode.

    My favorite part is: 'Lips weighted with words unspoken gasping upon tears I'll never let you see...
    ^
    This sums up the strength gained from years of onslaught. Like a metal that is toughened by a blacksmith's hammer.

    Take care,

    Michael, ((hugs)) xx

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Andrea, this is so beautiful even if it's sad as Brenda said only you can make such sad poetry, beautiful.

    All the best, hope the break helps.

    Em