This is downright the most saddest and yet the most beautiful poem I have read to date! Just breathtaking!

This is a masterpiece

This is just beautiful yet so sad, it actually brought a tear to my eye and gave me Goosebumps. I have read nothing like this before which is great because it's unique.

My words are like jasmines,
but not as pitiful,
like capital cities,
bu not as grand.
^^
The only thing is I think there's a typo on the second but in this stanza.

Em

Hello,

There is a sad beautiful tone to this poem. It has a hypnosis about it as metaphors are revealed and explained. There is much potential in the world and sadly most of it is never revealed. Sad indeed.

Take care,

Michael

Judging Comment

This is a sorrowful water color painting poem!

Just breathtaking!! In all its beauty, its dripping with sorrow and yet the reader cant help but be filled with peace and comfort. I was just taken by this piece!