Comments : Best Friend (my attempt at a Cinquain)

  • 8 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Hah, a poem about me! :D How did I never even see this. I don't particularly know the format of a Cinquain, but I suppose I do have to look it up to make sure you followed it correctly ... the only reason why I say that is because if you change the "listens" line and the "excitable" line, it'll be an acrostic for "SHELF". Amusing, for no rhyme or reason (hah, get it, no rhyme? ... okay, I'll shut up now.)

    Now that I look up the format, it appears the format is a bit off. Here's a link to how a Cinquain is supposed to be formatted ... though, the sites we use could very well be different.

    http://www.slideshare.net/nemetsn08/poem-examples

    Thank you for writing a poem about me though, sorry I never saw it until now :o

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    IdTakeABulletForYou

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Stephen,

      I used this site:

      http://www.kathimitchell.com/poemtypes.html

      It is for children, so they may have simplified it a little.

      I am trying to find new styles / different to how I usually write.
      You may not have seen it, as it is when you were on a break! :)

      I'm glad you enjoyed it!