Comments : My attempt at a Diamante poem

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Nicely done :)

  • 8 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I honestly can't tell if this is an evolution diamante, where the story is evolving. To start off with the word "friends" and to end with "Associate" insinuates that these people have spread apart over time... if so, this is quite a sad piece about the degradation of friendship, presumably that caused by drinking.

    I also have to look up this format, so one moment:

    Ooh, so it's called an Antonym Diamante! How touching. I think you did a wonderful job. I have no suggestions for correction.

    Comment 9 out of 12.

    5/5
    IdTakeABulletForYou

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thank You! Another one you have enjoyed! I wonder if this is something we could do as a group and if it will work! It would be interesting! :)

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thank You! Another one you have enjoyed! I wonder if this is something we could do as a group and if it will work! It would be interesting! :)