Comments : Me (autobiographical)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Very personal and unique.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I like this and haven't read too many poems of this ilk.
    It is brutally honest and is bookended to great affect by your penname.

    'who fears rejection, clowns and the ocean'

    ^^

    comic and sad, all at once. (the clowns bit!)

    SL

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks "oldie" lol
      I am trying to learn about all the different styles. Believe it or not, this was one a grade 2 teacher got her kids to do so they would learn more about each other!
      I found it interesting :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    I liked this a lot-you really gave me a peek into your world, no holds barred. Thank you for sharing "you"-well done-