Find the flow (short song)

by Maher   Jul 20, 2016


Would time remember me
if I stood right by the horizon
as the waves fold themselves
neatly upon the shore?
When daylight breaks on us
and the night calls the sea to rise up
to meet the sweet moon's glow
that's laid atop our floor.
Should it not rescue us
when the sun falls into it's slumber,
to kiss the warm air cold
and venge our felled tears.
The night, it grows on us;
our savior from incandescent heat,
through the fall of her rain;
her cool, gentle tease.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Maher

    Thanks all :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    A beautiful, image filled piece as always. Can't wait to hear the music to it, if it gets to that point :)

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Such a lovely write, your imagery is just beautiful. It really tells a story, well done!

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Well done SC. I love this piece :) i too can imagine it being sung

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Maher,

    I can almost hear this playing - perhaps repeated a couple of times to a wistful strumming of a guitar?
    Beautiful wording and imagery throughout.

    SL

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Sir. Quite possibly, yes. The music is still in the works and knowing me, it probably won't leave that phase, but overall it's a happier tune in my mind so far :)

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