Comments : These Lips Let Slip False Truths.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello dear,

    Lovely rhyming poem that breathes future happiness. A perfect place for a new chapter. The final reflection on darker days gone by provides the necessary background for this reader. Let's rub that happiness in the face of those dark days.

    There may be a typo in the final 'you' - possibly 'you're', 'you were'?

    Well done for fighting through the Web and feeling free.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    N, a wonderful, positive piece by you. I like that you are realising things because it will help.
    I hope your positive attitude sticks around :)

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks em. This is actually as the title suggest, all lies =/
      but thank you :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Sarcastic piece? The cats didn't come in for cuddles?

    the cats cuddling is relaxing...

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Its actually a poem which is all lies... and I do love my cuddles with the cats :)
      They always come in and cuddle.