5/5 Definitely can relate... Great job! |
by anand singh
A sad yet beautifully penned piece. I enjoy reading this piece. Good job. |
by Sushmita Mitra Chetri
Sad though beautiful to its core.... |
by BlueJay
This struck me with a heartrending pang of loss and confusion. Not confusion in the way that you wrote, but in the ways that I didn't really expect such an earth-shattering piece from the title. While I would have liked to see more diversity in the sentence structure or the style of this, I was completely overwhelmed by the emotion and voice. |