Comments : All That's Left of You (Demons)

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    WOWOWOWOWOWOW
    Excellent work. The imagery is amazing.! Well done S :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Stephen, such a sad poem! Well done though, lots of yearning and wishing things were different. But alas we know, that's not to be and you did a wonderful.job putting that into words. Hugs-

    • 8 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      Thanks for taking the time to read, Brenda. I know it's quite a lengthy piece, but it's very important to me. It means a lot that you read it! It's actually a spiritual sequel to one of my favorite poems, one that never actually got posted on here for some reason, called "The Heart I Couldn't Steal"-- it just has a little bit of the backstory. So it's nice to have written a successor after all these years, it feels good!

      Much love,
      IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    S, this is truly beautiful but sad all the same. The yearning, the heart ache, the wishing things were different and the imagery all makes this a perfect poem as always by you.
    Much love and I hope things get better, Em

    • 8 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      Thanks for taking the time to read, Em! Hope we both recover soon :) Even though this is going on 10 years for me lol.

      Much love,
      IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 8 years ago

    by Vicente

    Parts of this sound like they would come frome me. It's mildly pessimistic, but doesn't feel completely "dead". I liked it, but maybe it strikes close to home for me.