by Sunshine
The poem made me sad. Your word choice were tender. I did not visualise the scene, I went there and listened to- and watched the boat, and what a sad way to put it together (slouched sulkily) this is really heavy on the heart, as though it's going unwillingly, burdened and lost. |
by Hellon
Nana...I really wanted to praise your comment...it's much appreciated, but..I was travelling back to Australia when you left it and now, someone else has done it for me...thank you MKKK...just wanted to acknowledge it myself.... |
by Liz
I love there's so much mystery in this piece. The image you painted for the readers is perfect. When I first read it, I wondered, "WHY WHAT?!?!". lol. But after reading it over several times, I think not knowing why what makes me appreciate this piece more. |
by Brenda
Such a beautifully imaged write. So alone with your thoughts and yourself. The stark picture you have painted is so sad, I feel your solitude. Well done- |
I just love this so much! I'm in love with the sadness of this write. There is such a tenderness in this piece that breaks my heart. The imagery is perfect. |
by Mr. Darcy
Hello Hellon, |
by Em
Hellon, there's so much sadness within this write, it screams to me but as always it's an enthralling write (and I expect nothing less from you) seems we all have unanswered questions. |
by Mr. Darcy
Congratulations! !! |
by Brenda
Congratulations on this beautiful write! I loved it from the moment read it. Well done- |
by Em
Congratulations x |
Congrats on your win. |
by Maple Tree
Judging Comment |