Comments : TIME

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Wayne this is a thought provoking write that reminisces about the past and thinks about the now.
    I like the subtle rhyming, it makes the piece flow that bit smoother, in my opinion.
    I think we would all love to go back to a time when all we worried about was being home on time, a time of skimmed knees instead of broken hearts and paying bills.

    Great write, Em