Comments : Silent Sparrow

  • 8 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    An interesting twist you threw in there at the end; I thought it was an enjoyable read!

    5/5
    IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is an interesting poem and I suppose the idea could be applied to numerous scenarios in life. Those in positions of wealth and power who don't struggle day-to-day often ignore the 'sparrows underfoot'.

    Well done on this,

    SL

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    2am will comment tomorrow x