by WonderingSpiritDiaries Aug 6, 2016
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Stop messing with my head |
by Mello193
Great poem, but the rhyming was so off It bothered me so I took the liberty of fixing it and editing it as I saw fit to have syllable count and rhymes. You were pretty good up until the last stanza with the second and fourth line just fell apart. |